Look For…
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Definitely
(prove it, can refer to item on paper by marking # and letter)
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There was an attempt
(please write a note on how it can be improved)
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Area 1) Introduction and ATQ |
(a) Is there a narrowing intro ¶ in the ▽ format?
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(b) Did they set the stage in the opening sentences?
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(c) Did they include a thesis at the end of ¶1 that makes sense? Underline it.
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(d) Did the thesis ATQ fully and exactly as it was asked?
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(e) Is the thesis focused, acknowledging complexity of question?
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Name of Analyzer for Area 1:
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(a) Do they use the proper # of ¶s?
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5 or 6 or More
circle one
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(b) For every body ¶, does the topic sentence relate directly and obviously to the thesis?
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(c) Does each body ¶ relate one central idea? (not two, one)
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In the margin make note of the topic of each ¶.
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In the margin make note of the topic of each ¶ and note where it could be improved.
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(d) Is the best piece of evidence presented first?
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Yes
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Arguably
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(e) Are the docs chosen to support the topic sentence appropriate?
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Name of Analyzer for Area 2:
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Area 3) Document Analysis and Synthesis |
(a) Do they analyze (pick apart) 4-5 documents to support their points?
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(b) Do they understand the basic idea behind each doc?
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Missed one.
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(c) Are docs cited appropriately with parentheses and inline?
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(d) Are docs grouped in a logical way? (ie. similar, conflicting)
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(e) Is the relationship between docs explained?
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Name of Analyzer for Area 3:
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Area 4) Process and Precision |
(a) Is “outside” historic info used to help prove evidence or analyze docs?
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(b) Is historic information/evidence (not arguments) mostly accurate?
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(c) Are key words spelled correctly? Do grammar mistakes take little away from clear, communication? Is it readable?
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(d) Do they mention pertinent proper names and events specifically?
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(e) Is it written in an academic tone? Is word choice/diction appropriate?
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Name of Analyzer for Area 4:
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